The Crumbling World

Firstly, I want to give props to the author for having amazing grammar despite being sixteen and English speaking. His writing style is very unique, switching back and forth between perspectives of the characters so you can get everyone’s thought’s on the situation. It’s action packed, and the author has a way with his words. Everything is well balanced with descriptions where I can get a clear mental image on the chaos that happens. I’m not going to spoil anything, but you should definitely give this a read. Please don’t pass this gem up.

Overall, I enjoyed the story and thought it was a worthwhile read. The Grammer was good, the plot was good, and the action was fast paced, but not in a bad way. Good job author, keep up the good work!

Writing Quality : Extremely well done. No error that could affect the flow of the novel. The mistakes i found didn't disrupt me whatsoever. Updating: Updating regularly is very hard. I give the author the well deserved 5 stars for their updates. Story Development: The story stays stays on point and doesn't drift far from the plot, and progresses well. Well done. Character Design: Good job to author. World background : A good constructed fantasy world with horror as a subtheme. Overall the book is quite good.

This is my very first work, and I would appreciate it if you could point out any mistakes. Additionally, the initial chapters might appear a bit shorter compared to the ones that follow, but I will work on improving them over time

This show starts really well and shows how much potential there is.Big fan so far.Keep it up!

Banger of a story. I am hyped to see where this is going

I really like where the story is going to. It's something else, i would say it is outstanding. Keep up the great work author👍

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I looked at the picture of the book in the beginning and was just shocked at how good it looked and I just had to read this book. The book was great, it always gave me an adrenaline rush in between. Also the cover of the book is amazingly well painted. I recommend everyone to read this book[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins]

Its my first time reading a novel, but from what i have seen i think im going more for this. I realy like the development of this story. And the way it is written

A Packed Story! For the readers who love action, disasters and horror this one is for you. Packed with a series of events occurring one after another I would say it's a must read ✨. I can't get enough of the storyline, that much interesting it is. A really great story with good grammar and everything.It has got the potential. Keep up the good work author [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]!

It’s a very exciting novel that captivates the reader right from the start. It was great to read the novel from start to finish due to the incredible characters that you can really empathize with and the surroundings that are perfectly described.I would definitely recommend reading this novel. The author did a really good job writing this amazing story

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. The storytelling was captivating, and the characters felt incredibly real. The author's ability to create a vivid and immersive world is commendable. The pacing kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found it difficult to put the book down. Overall, it's a must-read for anyone who appreciates a well-crafted story.It changed my life.

best book i love the idea and the book changed my life. Read the book!

Am I watching a disaster movie or what! Right from the beginning an intense run against the time and nature began. If time helps, nature reduces the progress.. An eternal tug of war of hope and desperation. A must read novel for disaster story lovers!!! I'm collecting it and hope you do too!!

Amazing grammar for being only 16 and being from Germany. Keep up the work.

Hope you're doing well, I hope to read your novel as you keep writing. fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

It has an very interesting start and if you read it you see what i mean lol, definitely surprised me. I do enjoy the way they convey the mc's emotion about what has happened to him.

I'm a big fan of the apocalypse genre where disaster and ruin flock together. The author's ability to create realistic and intense situations is exceptional. I feel more drawn to the story as I read. This is a good book, I highly recommend it. 👌✨

One word. Sikeee. I love the character development and the world development. The Author really put detail into every major scenes. Although I'm still at chapter five I'll give four stars for now.

If you're a fan of gripping, atmospheric storytelling, this is a must-read. The author's ability to draw readers into the narrative is truly exceptional, and I highly recommend this book to anyone seeking an unforgettable literary journey. Five stars well earned!