Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

i know the author is in a hurry to write about the main story but with such an amazing back story i am personally in no hurry i am just in love with this part of the story

I think the summary worked. You didn't need to focus on the slavery aspect, so you summarized it with sufficient detail.

ain't u going to have him as one of the founding fathers

first time writing comments for any book and its a request ... please dont drop the story.. as long as you stick to current format i think it will garner more attention as the story is really good... thnks for your hard work

Will there be a meeting between Mc and Darwin? Darwin's reaction to seeing Adam would be funny.

he flexed his societal power and ended slavery in decades

We have seen many stories about Twilight. But haven't seen something like this. You should slow down. You can enter the plot in like 20 chaps or more. There is no need to accelerate the story.

Let him have legionaries inside the bank! For "tradition"! Dude's gonna be a shadow ruler by accident. And ***especially.

Having money can fix almost everything.

you had me worried I wasn't going to get my fix anymore

I’m in love with that story. I really need more and I genuinely hope I don’t need to wait another two weeks for the next chapter. But no pressure. In the end what matters is the quality for me not the quantity so keep up the good work :)

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter 🙂

I can't wait for him to meet his mate (Alice staaaaaaaaaaare)

You should do this. But with mass effect

thanks for the chapter!

Are there any good twilight stories where the love interest is not alice

Thank you for the chapter

El resumen fue lo suficientemente bueno la verdad, otra cosa y es que si quieres llegar al canon...puedes hacer flashback cada que se le pregunte al MC algo del pasado, tipo dos capítulos resumiendo un echo histórico donde estuvo presente