Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

The best fanfiction Twilight I've ever read. I am waiting for more.

I know that you want mc to be not to op but man now you making it despointment on it power nerf ,no doubt it good twilight novel thanks for chapter man

Thanks for the Chapter, this is the best Twilight fic í have read. Its good to see Adam with Aura Manipulation like RBWY. Please author-san consider giving him some Dragon Ball techs like kienzan and ki rain and of course kamehameha. Also Adam should try to get some Vamps in EEUU, Russia and China governments(Puppet presidents/defense secretaries) to secure a Plan B in case the Volturi go rogue or the Supernatural gets exposed

No, thank you for writing such a great story that’s able to make me check if there is a new update every single day. The story did well to pull me in and not let me leave. You are a very good writer and I hope you keep writing when you have the time. Thank you again for all your hard work.

Whelp me just waiting here for the meeting of his mate

just a thought, later in the timeline once he has a better handle on his aura could he add the ability to it like surface thought reading or like Bella did being able to transfer memories using aura as a medium? As it has been confirmed with practice and usage over long periods of time abilities advance/evolve.

Still op though, he can fly if not he can step into Air he can copy working way of a supernova and with lower energy cause more destruction from the blast back in the chapter.

author aura is a manifestation of one's life force, mortals have little life force that's why they die. But for immortals their life force should be a lot, I dare say nigh-infinite so I don't know why Adam has so little aura even if it was a vampire their aura should be massive

you and Koji are probably the best author here in this app. and I'm amazed how well you flesh out your story and truly make the universe your own. good job.

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

d accord avec Drixia, meilleur histoire sur ce thème que j ai jamais lus , merci beaucoup (french)

Cómo ha dicho otro compañero lector, este es el mejor fanfic de crepúsculo de toda la plataforma.

You are an amazing author, your stories are original, entertaining, well thought out, and written. Thanks for sharing them and the chapter.

Thanks for chapter

this has been an amazing ride so far I look forward to finishing this one

I am confuse, what is the basis of his aura manipulation?

I thank you for the chapter.