Calleum_Artori
Author you should include the Stream Chat more in the story, as it feels like you are neglecting his streamer aspect. Maybe a small segment each chapter of the chat interacting with the streamer or reacting to the things the streamer has done or to themselves. Like at least three messages of chatters talking each chapter like the RWBY characters are interacting and reacting.
As dark as it was… art is an explosion! What are you running to pop something outside the breakers? Or is this a rigged electric system that would make U.S.’s OSHA people have a stroke? I’ve fried a lot of stuff in my time but never got a boom without gas or gun powder. (Natural, gasoline or propane. Loss of hair was worth it!) If your building has breakers they are either stuck or absolutely way to high for the house. I’ve got one with a large welder so it’s triple what the house starts with so I am careful. (Even that isn’t recommended unless the house is newish. Old circuitry not so happy.)