Marine0IQ
When I read the chapter I imagine it as cartoon animations and it ends up being short and insipid. It doesn't seem like a bad fanfic to me, it just gives me the impression that the contents of the chapter are few. That is to say, in this chapter he goes to Gwen's place, they see the issue of clothing, a little flirting and Peter shows off the ability to copy the clothes with his body and that's it. It seems stuffed, the only relevant thing being the clothing. I repeat, the fanfic is not bad, but I am no longer feeling as much enthusiasm as at the beginning (traductor)