Comments of chapter undefined of IN Harry Potter With a System

I like the story, so keep it up. [img=recommend]

Don't bother them your story is good, op but cautious character is good and

You have a plan for the story, not if some people don't like it because the (MC) thinks too much before acting.1. He has family, friends and a future to worry about, no matter how much power he has, a divine being is watching him or maybe there are several who know what the author has planned for the MC. 2. For every step he takes and for every decision he makes, the future changes for better or worse, he is not omnipotent or omniscient, he is a mortal, okay, not a divine being for now, right? 3. The MC may be (OP) and everything but he is not free to do what he wants because at any moment a divine being can interfere. 4. Remember the incident of the artifact that he created by accident, they came or at least a God came and intervened and put restrictions on (OP) but not completely for now I think. The author has plans, you just have to wait and see the story goes this way for a reason and only the author knows why maybe he has much bigger plans than we think. Who knows, maybe it's for that reason that he hasn't been practically invincible since the first chapter.Continuing the story for now is very interesting after all it is the first story I always check when I get up hehehe. 10000/100 don't give up.English is not my main language, okay if there are spelling problems, I'm sorry, I'm just saying hehehe.

Deleting reviews will only make readers more annoyed if you're new to this don't expect to receive good reviews onlyi've seen lot of author claiming some reviews are baseless and malicious which infact was a genuine criticism concerning grammer but he showed fellow readers in discord what it was

I find this story pretty enjoyable. don't let it get to you author

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personally I like your story the only thing complaint I have isn't important it's more of a preference, the mc is a little too benevolent imo

the best writers write what they want and don't bother with what others say this has been the case for centuries so just write what you want to write

I like ur story . keep it up .

why are u even wasting your energy on deleting those reviewsnobody is forcing anyone to read the storyif anybody don't have any positive criticism then just ignore itlet others enjoy it

honestly this is not the worst ff I have read, it would do you good to make the story more detailed. details are needed for a good story. like the dagger there are many types of dagger, what about embellishments? also delving more into relationships and the MCs inner thoughts. this story while not bad kinda reads like one of those cliffnotes books that someone buys to pass a highschool english test. once again not a bad story just needs more details and inner ruminations.

You are doing well enligh if you were doing this for money then I would criticize you but this is fine however if you really want to get better at writing try making a multicross fanfic they strain the writer but make their quality better

it´s a bit cringe but still enjoyable. the issue is the fast pace, it's too fast and he becomes too OP. on the character´s side it's a bit bland because everything is on HP point of view and there are too many character. also most of them are too trusty or depicted too dark so the polarity is a bit o the strong side which creates the cringe issue. but don´t worry, all in all I still enjoy the story 😉

I'm glad to read your story and be happy to continue reading it. My only wish is for longer chapter, but as it is I still enjoy it. wish you good health and good life

Keep up the great work if people don’t like reading your story they can move on so keep writing what you want also like you said if it’s postive that’s different

good on you keep it up

Haters gonadotropin hate, can't satisfy everyone, so just do you, it's all good 👌

It's a great story, I love it. Don't bother about the complaints. If they don't like then they should move. More thanks.

haters have nothing better to do just ignore them. if you enjoy writing then do it

I think your story is good, I am liking it...