I really like this honestly although I do feel there's too much maria and not enough everyone else imo

A fat man? Lol

Honestly reading this feels confusing and well honestly the mtl vibe is strong

It's very good although it's sad I'm not sure if Ginny's friendship can ever be repaired after him doing this letting them realize that it was him..I mean so far I don't see how letting them know it was him is beneficial...

I love it but I hate cliffhangers lol

Great story although I'm not a fan of the focus on cho

complexity lol

I didn't understand any of that second half honestly

I don't know but the example is kinda interesting. although that's not jinch..however you say it..it's not that if it was kushina then yeah it would be but kurama is the tailed beast. Anyway that chatgpt didn't look too weird honestly then again I'm used to seeing the older versions of it *shrugs*

Will there be any romance later on In the story out of curiosity

Well Gabriel if you want it to be awhile term before the romance actually happens Inbetween that time maybe rias or serafall or maybe grayfia or even sona but you haven't even introduced everyone yet so choosing a romance person is a little too soon since there's been too few interactions with most Characters

I feel like the writing style suddenly change but maybe it's just me

Oof

I like the idea of Hermione for his love interest especially with their interactions so far

Why did Cyrus reveal himself to Hermione though I don't really understand that..

I love this so far especially the mc so far except some minor things. Like the oc Characters especially like the maid or Alice. Also don't really like latia being so close to the mc honestly but ehh it's your story and it's very good.

So confusing I don't even know what happened in this chapter....

It got wack very fast

Lol ran lu bao

I'll be honest I didn't really like that at the end where he was dragged back and it didn't seem like anyone took it completely seriously but you do you I love your story :)