Now this is a weird one for sure. I usually try to avoid realism when I come to read fiction. I already get that too much in life afterall. But this one while being fictional and whacky at times, is so deep routed in realism that I really can't make heads or tails of it. First and foremost though I request all the wannabe Top G emo gigachads of this era of internet to not try this one. This contains NTR elements but it might as well be actual NTR for you. And this contains a MC with humanity and humility, someone who is good at many a thing while still retaining human empathy. And did I mention that the MC is humble? If I didn't then I'm doing it now, The MC is Humble. So don't try any further and kindly leave. It just isn't for you man.___________________________________________________________________________Hopefully the Top G's are gone. So we can go to the actual review. Writing Quality(Personally: 4/5) (WN standards: 4.7/5): This is one of the better written stories on this platform. Author uses simple English while still driving home the complexity. The writing Quality suits for a webnovel(not necessarily this app🌚). Requires some fine tuning of PoV shifts and there are occasional spelling mistakes that could be eliminated with proof reading. The fighting choreos are great as well, though I wish they were a bit longer. Decent flow of the story and there isn't any noticeable breaks tbh. ________________________________________________________________________________Story development(4/5): Once again I Emphasize that this is not the kind of fiction that I prefer to indulge in. That said it is a fine piece of work. Going back to my earlier point, it does contain NTR elements. But readers gotta have some patience. Nothing drastic happens in this story and deep down you'd realize that the reality is always crueler than this. Anyways the NTR elements here is a plot device. The author already muted it as much as possible. And wait a bit before you draw your weapons, alright. It is supposed to make readers angry, uncomfortable... just so that the complex character of the MC can be shown in the very next chapter and his drastic actions can be justified. And this whole scenario is like a grain of sand in the beach of this story. In the grand scheme of things it's just a plot device to justify a too drastic character development. That aside, this fic is the perfect example of Murphy's law. To the author, keep on doing what you're doing. Believe in yourself, you've a talent for this. Here everyone(including myself) can have an opinion. Don't put too much importance on them. Character Design(4/5): I don't like this kinda MC at all lol. He's the dream son of every Asian parent. He's great at many a things and he has good ethics, morals and professionalism. He is capable of human sympathy, empathy, anger, hatred and love. He's the bane of all Alpha, Sigma, Gamma, Lambda, Omega males out there. Even with all these reason to be arrogant, he's a goody two shoes Human. Evrything that can happen wrong goes wrong in his life. Sometimes comical, sometimes serious. Yet even with all this he goes on and on, taking everything in strides. This is honestly a great MC, that I do not like at all. To the author, I really want to see the inner struggles of the MC. How he copes with these inside his head. What he does wrong, how he overcomes his inner demons. That perspective is kinda missing in this story. ________________________________________________________________________________Updating Stability(5/5): I don't really cut any points here unless it's really bad. ________________________________________________________________________________World Background(3/5): The low score isn't reflective of the actual writing, instead my personal bias against realism stories and there's still so much more to explore hence I can't give full score. ________________________________________________________________________________Overall(4/5): Not a story for everyones's palette. Definitely not for Top Gs. Not for my kinda "drowning-in-fantasy" species either. But if you're a literature lover that wants to see the world of reality in a controllable supernatural settings, then please try it. For this is a great work. To the author, Wrong app to publish the story but I honestly don't know what the alternative would be.
