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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ultimate Saiyan Warrior Reborn

Andrei0715
Andrei0715Lv11Andrei0715

I like this story, but I think a rewrite is in order from my opinion do it only in dragon ball, and the multiverse part to be only the 12 universes, and i like to see that Connor story made separate as another story, it's is really needed, some thing darker as a dc reincarnate works right now

Overlord378
Overlord378Lv4Overlord378

When they get powerful enough/you want to do it, you could honestly pull a DarkWolfShiro. AKA, have the original create a copy of themselves; and put said copy in the same situation they were in, but don't let others outside of said Universe/Multiverse (because Dragon Ball be like that, with separate timelines and universes being a cannon thing) intervene. Basically having the story play out, without being interrupted by the wider Multiverse.

REN_SMITH
REN_SMITHLv4REN_SMITH

No don't restart it finish what you started

Misterio6676
Misterio6676Lv5Misterio6676

La verdad me gusta mucho esta historia pero diferentes personajes aunque la misma alma partida pero la misma alma hace que sea muy difícil casi entenderla si no has visto demasiados tics casi iguales además cómo vas a hacer después a reunirlos todos como un solo ser o que vivan independientemente Y la verdad yo diría que lo dejes de dragon ball súper y que lo hagas en los 12 universos si vas a hacerlos como parte de un alma que estén dispersados en los 12 universos y que se encuentran por algún motivo o alguna conexión qué es su alma partida

Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1Tasha_Williams_0673

I was just stocking up chapters to read later. I don't personally have any problems with the novel other than the kryptonian seeming more like the MC as he does what he likes while the MC is constantly restricting himself and just focusing on one woman when he can have multiple.

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Devastator_21
Devastator_21Lv2Devastator_21

I like it, yes there are some things you could improve but it genuinely interesting I would say is to finish this book/story and either rewrite it or pull a Dark Wolf Shiro.

Knight_Owl1
Knight_Owl1Lv4Knight_Owl1

PLEASE NO I'M HERE This story is really good so far and I'm interested in what's going to happen next so please continue it

gabriel_rodriguez_6771
gabriel_rodriguez_6771Lv2gabriel_rodriguez_6771

Yup I think he went mambo with those from the multiverse

yair_Ortiz
yair_OrtizLv1yair_Ortiz

La mejor historia hasta el momento que he leído sigue así autor.

Jacklyn_Seras
Jacklyn_SerasLv14Jacklyn_Seras

I like it. Love how you romancing Voma and getting to the potential that she could have. So long as you don't go SSJ5 or higher and stay at SSJ4 plus the additional forms am fine. Stack as many different forms as you like within reason and I should like the result.

ll_II
ll_IILv1ll_II

please don’t restart the story I was here since the beginning of the story reading it and patiently waiting for the next chapter and you said that the story will end about 150 chapters continue writing it and after that create new story more refined because you will gain experience from this story don’t give up on a story you put your effort into it because some people stop reading it I myself never write a comment in your stories but I like them but at the end of the day this is your work do whatever you want

Gabriel_Titus
Gabriel_TitusLv11Gabriel_Titus

separate the mc's into different fics

FIGHTING_GAMER
FIGHTING_GAMERLv4FIGHTING_GAMER

Yes but allow him to travel to dc universe

gamertag_tv
gamertag_tvLv1gamertag_tv

Não, se vc não quiser continuar apenas da um final aleatório pra história não recomeçe é realmente horrível ler até agr pra história ter que reiniciar tudo denovo, quanto ao aspecto multiverso eu gosto muito, porém podia ser versos mais fortes tipo mundos de cultivo e mais tecnológicos, apesar do verso de dc ser muito forte o mc não foi pra lá

wanderer12
wanderer12Lv4wanderer12

don't worry for I'm here

Rohail_Mahmood
Rohail_MahmoodLv4Rohail_Mahmood

Into the fate part

gmpimp39
gmpimp39Lv5gmpimp39

yes but not just the twelve universes but other dragon ball timelines like gt, movies, xenoverse etc..