Moonlit Identity [BL]

I am a first-time writer, attempting to build a magical story. So please read, support, and guide this story as much as possible. I hope you enjoy this journey.

The story has a very sudden start with no definite past of the character. It is only vaguely mentioned that character has transmigrated. We do not know much about his new environment nor the old one. Only that he is a vampire in transition. It is interesting and grows curiosity among readers. All in all, although there are only two chapters right now the story is worth reading.

You know what, I really liked this story, it's something I'm really into and although the beginning might throw you off for a minute, it's like it walks you through it, without just telling you, you go through his new life with him and he brings you along, it's truly spectacular to imagine and view, I don't really have any complaints with anything in the novel, and honestly I really enjoyed it. So in all and all, Awesome book author! And I can't wait for another chapter ✨

OMG can't stop reading I think am getting addicted to this book ...Once I started reading I couldn't get enough of it . Give me more please update ... please

I LOVE this. It is exciting, well paced and makes you want to read more. I love the way this writer describes everything so well. You feel as if you are there.

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So far the story is quite good, hard to say much as there are only 2 chapters. However it still managed to grip me and I am left wanting more. I've added it to my library!

The story and the plot grabbed my interest from the first chapter. I loved the descriptions of each scene especially the action one. It is very simple to read with catchy dialogues. Luan does have the charm to capture people's attention and here I am eager to see the next chapter. Keep going, author... All the best.

The author has done more than just enough. This book is amazing with a gripping story that hooks you in the first few chapters. The only thing to make it better is to update more often

Great story, the writing style is also good... I found the plot really interesting. Hooked me from the first page...Can't wait to read more!

It's quite an interesting book...I'm a fan of fantasy and especially werewolves..and this book gives all to quench my thirst. It's filled with some amazing scenes and the writing quality is awesome. I would like to follow its lead.

Alright, what did I just read 😂😂.. Men!, it feels like am actually there in the book, what kind of magic is this, author 😂😂.. Oh God, am totally loving this book right now. Author just update, update, update, alright..

I really like the world design. It feels dark and creepy, yet realistic. The pacing is extremely well designed and the world building as well, as mentioned before. This is an extremely engaging story and I recommend everyone to check it out. I will definitely continue to read it.

I must say that this is a very good book. I think I'm already in love with the characters.

Great read! Requires a little transition at first but a very good read overall

I am hooked. The starting, the characters, and the background setting plus the plot follow up are so awesome. I love it already. The MC is the one who got me on edge waiting for his next act. I love it.

The concept was unique to me and was very original. Like a dual personality of a female and male in one body. Also liked the execution of such a difficult idea. This is pretty much to my liking! Kudos and a job well done. [img=strong][img=update]

Hmmm, it's a good story, but if you could make the MC motives clearer, I could get immersed more in the story. Keep up the good work, Author!

It captures the reader's attention and never lets go. Once your curiosity is satisfied then new questions arise... once those are answered then there's another. The story starts by stirring up some emotions and once you are hooked in there's no way out. I author's way of describing the feelings, atmosphere, and settings is smooth and fresh. The writing style and grammar is clean, and the plot and world bg develop as we learn more about the MC and his current state. It's binge-worthy. We need more chapters...

The writing of the characters is good, the only mistake I've seen is that some commas are written when they shouldn't be there, and sometimes there is something wrong with the sentences, a single word or so. it was good since the name you used in the characters isn't randomized and there's also a background within the name like Samuel who became Lucifer but that's just in the show Since in the bible, it wasn't stated he became Lucifer but the description that you showed about him is good since Lucifer is known for being prideful There was sometimes no description of where they are but it's still good.