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2023-06-03 22:17

You know what, I really liked this story, it's something I'm really into and although the beginning might throw you off for a minute, it's like it walks you through it, without just telling you, you go through his new life with him and he brings you along, it's truly spectacular to imagine and view, I don't really have any complaints with anything in the novel, and honestly I really enjoyed it. So in all and all, Awesome book author! And I can't wait for another chapter ✨

Moonlit Identity [BL]

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I am a first-time writer, attempting to build a magical story. So please read, support, and guide this story as much as possible. I hope you enjoy this journey.

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