RazackCh
My brother, although I do not know if you will read my comment, but I wanted to tell you that I am "the admirer of your writing from Morocco", I found many companions and friends who agree with me, and you are the reason for a brotherly friendship between us, so I hope you will not stop posting. And do not prolong our absence.
i think the main problem here is that people didnt get the resolution to climax for quite a while. Maybe it would be better to have this kinda worldbuilding and character development after the climax has been resolved. as i mentioned before it feels like being edged and blue balled. hencewhy people's negative reaction. i assure you if the resolution was done before the character exploration chapters the response would be far better. While I am not a patr3on supporter yet, i would like to implore you to continue your current work as it is good as it is right now. Rewriting would just trigger those dissastified readers even more since you know, after all the edging they didnt get the release they wanted
I don't mind the povs tbh but you should utilise it better. Don't use change of pov as a cliffhanger. Doing so will kill the suspense for intended cliffhanger. Also try not make 3 parts for a chapter with same pov that is not mc. Mix it up a little by using some other char pov or just merge the chapters, no need to make it three parts of nothing happening.
To reorganize my previous thought to simplify reader aint mad because of the story itself they just mad they havent reached conclusion to the cliffhanger. I am sure none of the negative comments are dissastified with the direction or writing of story itself. Just this aqua getting stabbed cliffhanger. tough it out until chapter 28 or 29 when reaction get unleashed and people will love it