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LordValmar
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If you wanted a reason to break them up, you could just have her end it by dating some actor or being caught sleeping with some casting director or something. You know, the common practice stuff that was rampant in hollywood at the time. Bringing in the mother and drama with it... I mean, it isn't bad, but you have a history of being really heavy-handed when dealing with personal drama where you amplify the antagonists flaws and faults to insane degrees to make it so incredibly one-sided that its almost impossible to feel even the slightest sympathy for anyone not Kazir. Like with his ex wife, where her only defining characteristics seemed to be crafted solely to be as horrible a person as possible.

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AKASHIIIi
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I hope he won't give her daughter any role...

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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4ArdaPendragon

Please do not compromise,There's no point in helping someone who doesn't love him and abandoned him.

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Insta_username
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Or we can just skip this arc Works everytime 👌

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Sandford_96
Sandford_96Lv5Sandford_96

Yeah this is kinda getting boring with all the drama hope you don't drag it outuch longer also hope you don't have him agree to help.

Adiavts
AdiavtsLv2Adiavts

No hagas un drama con Reese Whiterspon simplemente has que sus trabajos se cruzen por ejemplo ella trabaja en la tarde y el en la noche no tienen tiempo para verse asi que deciden terminar con esa extraña relacion y ser solo amigos no habia ningun problema entre ellos pues simplemente no hay tiempo, ademas la carrera de Reese como actriz al despegar le demandara mas tiempo es un resultado normal, por cierto dijiste que la FL seria Jennifer Connelly habra alguien antes que ella o como?

ThePandaCritic
ThePandaCriticLv1ThePandaCritic

Bruh a break up so he can date other people. Stw it's like why even had him be in a healthy relationship if u simply goin to end it based on drama. Could've simply been a hook up without feelings..u invested in a relationship only to end it for him to explore .

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Debanga_4953
Debanga_4953Lv4Debanga_4953

just don't make it a soap opera a little drama maybe but just don't u understand what I am saying plz

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Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

There's a lot of He/She Mistakes. Author-san also named MC wrongly multiple times like you call him Lazir,Calix,Keith...etc.in different Chapters.

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Rigchel
RigchelLv4Rigchel

Now I wonder if this incident will get blown out of proportions or Kazir will make a compromise since he doesn't want any unnecessary drama in his life. I know some of the readers don't like it but everyone has to compromise at some point in their life as it an undeniable fact of life

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Pendora10
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hating god for stupidity and every choice they make themselves lol weak people

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Arbuz777
Arbuz777Lv4Arbuz777

Another Leech hoe

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kiritov2
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Thanks for The chapter

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Insane_Fantasy
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tftc~~~○●

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Emiko_Okazaki
Emiko_OkazakiLv4Emiko_Okazaki

tftc

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Siuuu
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Thanks for the chapter.

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DevilsArray
DevilsArrayLv5DevilsArray

Nice

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indroid
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Thanks for the chapter

Ductor_Storage
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Thanks for the chapter