I love the story as a whole. The actions, flownn of story, the characters and ofcorz the smut scenes! though, i did not give a perfect rating since there still few things that can be improve. like being detailed how certain things or scenario turned out to be, then be more creative on the narration, few times the characters' names were mixed...those are the few things.
Anyway, thanks for this treasure dear author.
Goodluck! and keep it up.
i'll be reading the "the queen of rifts" next.
see you there. π