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AespatheticLv131yr
2023-08-28 10:32

it's an okay novel, but the wording seems really off in a lot of the chapters. World development is quite confusing, too, and the pacing mixed with weird writing just confuses me even more. I definitely think there is no native English speaker proofreading the novel, and everything feels either AI made or MTL translated.

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