CORNBRINGER
This chap was so cringe, i know u want character devt but this is just too fkin obvious, nothing new here. I could guess the whole chapter by the scenario. Just push the story forward, this scenes seem to be too point less and feel like fillers. Or you could have presented this char devt using some less obvious scenarios.
Subject_Omicron:i had a seizure trying to read this,typing this from the hospital