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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Rebirth in the Ninja World

1Primo
1PrimoLv141Primo

Don't even understand why the Author is dead set on changing the plot so much that he wants a relationship with Kushina with this character. It's ultimately strange because the whole plot revolves around her son being the "chosen" one to save the ninja world. Moreover I don't even understand the appeal to want her so much to do this. 'cause she likes ramen?

1Primo
1PrimoLv141Primo

Also I'm not saying this to prevent it. It's your story have them marry and birth Indra it doesn't matter. I'm just talking about fanfic's in general. If you build an original plot/character and have the ability to literally create a perfect women including her looks, flaws, speech, backstory, etc. Why go after someone from the main cast especially when she's to birth the savior? I just find it strange.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.