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  • 1Primo
    1Primo13d
    Replied to Fire_Boy_5319

    It's clearly not Gai's sweatsuit...

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    Naruto: The Mightiest Kai
    Anime & Comics · Han_989
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo5mth
    Commented

    Man this part is trash. Hopefully the story can ramp up again without this foreshadowing for a harem. I'm only here for the action, but I suppose others may like it.

    Ch 77 Ch-77 First kiss.
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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo8mth
    Replied to JEVIL_devil13

    you couldn't explain more so I know what this is about? Why is he disgusting?

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    Chat group for geniuses ( COMPLETED )
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo9mth
    Commented

    Don't like the Evolving Amplifying Mark. Five-fold the strength in the future? While he's already at Jounin level with only five years of training. If this trend continues what tension would there even be in fights? It's going to be boring and predictable or you'll end up having to nerf and or come up with excuses like needing to "hide his powers" to make sense.

    Ch 14 Ch-14 Mastering the Storm Chakra Mode
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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo9mth
    Replied to MISTER_Gf

    That doesn't even make much sense and if it did happen it would only be wish-fulfillment and would ruin the story.

    Ch 29 Ch-29 The Imbued Power and the Mark of Protection
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    Uzumaki Fire God
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo10mth
    Replied to Sword_daoist19

    You are right I've completely forgotten, but perhaps someone fresh will understand and can take your comment into consideration who felt like me at the time. All good thanks for pointing it out.

    James looked at Quinn's hands and nervously thought, 'He won't make a big deal about this, right? He did that to himself on his own and isn't very bothered about it. So we are good, right…? Right?'
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo10mth
    Replied to Sword_daoist19

    I would be shocked, angry, confused, and I would feel like it was not justified.

    James looked at Quinn's hands and nervously thought, 'He won't make a big deal about this, right? He did that to himself on his own and isn't very bothered about it. So we are good, right…? Right?'
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo11mth
    Commented

    C'mon she didn't think, "You are now marked as my prey. I will come back when you are more delicious", was important? Along with the bite mark... ^^ okay. Well not like he will be able to kill her anyways just sayin for a ninja that is supposedly was trained in tactics and fighting it is a weird oversight and doesn't make sense.

    After explaining to her what happened, she nodded. Natsume said that the snake brought her into a genjutsu to speak to her. After stating that she was not an interesting prey, it left her alone. Although she hid some details, she didn't think they were important and didn't understand them completely. As for the bite on her leg, she didn't sense anything different, so she assumed it was just part of the genjutsu.
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    Reborn in the Warring States Period
    Anime & Comics · Pengincognito
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo11mth
    Commented

    Lol I kinda feel dumb. I was like if were going with what's definitely everywhere then air...

    Ch 13 System Update
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    Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Commented

    What happened to my mind body soul are yours? I'll follow your commands with complete obedience. People get comfortable then forget what they promised.

    "Survival and competence are important; I'm not arguing against that point. But I also consider my future to be of high importance. If these test scores decide where my life is heading in the short term, then I, one hundred percent, absolutely want to perform the best I can," said Takuma. He shrugged, "I will learn these jutsus even if I have to learn them by myself— but I'd very much prefer to learn from you. The thing is, I'll give learning jutsu a portion of my day; that will cut in on the training regime you have me follow on my own. By agreeing to teach me, you can control the time I devote to learning jutsus for the test."
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Commented

    Agree here. Absolutely hate the "kit" thing that they use for Kurama. Also don't like the "It's Pack their Pack" thing they do with Kakashi either.

    That, and the word "kit" was just as seared into my memories as pure and utter cringe. And bold text for demon speech. Luckily, actually being here, even if I did meet a demon or tailed beast, I wouldn't have to suffer reading that stuff anymore.
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    Naruto- Evil Eyes (Sasuke SI)
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Commented

    Honestly it felt like the author just vomited out wverything he wanted to learn. How about showing rather than telling?

    Ch 4 Chapter-4 Training Starts
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    Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke and Dominate Elemental Nation
    Anime & Comics · akhtar_007
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Replied to Young_fruit_Smiley

    Are u not tired of fanfics with the "gamer" ability. He already has something similar to a status window.

    "The first goal is to have enough strength and survivability."
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    Lord Of Hunters - Hunter X Hunter
    Anime & Comics · Adenlia
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Commented

    Well, I'll exit here. Cya ✌🏾

    "NOOO!" she shouted, and her chakra burst from her body. She felt it concentrate in her back and groped her reserves drop tremendously as she heard the sound of metal whistling through the air.
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    Naruto SI : LIGHTNING AND ROSES
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Replied to Werddrew

    Please send me the link as well.

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    I’m Really Not a Nen Master!
    Anime & Comics · Werddrew
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Replied to 1Primo

    There's been 8 chapters of training room, elemental nature, elemental crystals, seals, and other less noteworthy things that could have all been briefly done reviewed within a chapter or three. It's been really boring.

    Ch 94 Chapter 92 : History Lesson - Elemental Crystals
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Commented

    Then briefly give an overview of the fights that Fujin does not participate in through his observations. Example: "Fujin stood on the stands as the battles continued. 3 teams were eliminated with (insert name) being disqualified due to poison, (insert name) due to a miscalculation on chakra exhaustion, etc. This whole chunin arc has been really long winded as well. Who cares about the training room seals, the elemental crystals and whatever else if it doesn't come up in the future as foreshadowing. These should be lightly told to give an overview and the plot should move. Not devote a whole chapter to this stuff.

    Ch 94 Chapter 92 : History Lesson - Elemental Crystals
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Replied to Taragorm

    This guy is bonkers. That was the best part. In times of despair...

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    Bleach: Innate Control
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Posted

    I'm truly enjoying it. Sad that there are only 16 chapters wish I found this later. Overall I find the plot, characters, OC, and world building topnotch. Don't care if anyone else bothers reading it or what opinions they have, but I'm waiting for the next chap. Seems to update regularly hopefully that continues.

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    Bleach: Innate Control
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  • 1Primo
    1Primo1yr
    Replied to 1Primo

    Also I'm not saying this to prevent it. It's your story have them marry and birth Indra it doesn't matter. I'm just talking about fanfic's in general. If you build an original plot/character and have the ability to literally create a perfect women including her looks, flaws, speech, backstory, etc. Why go after someone from the main cast especially when she's to birth the savior? I just find it strange.

    Ch 26 26
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    Naruto: Rebirth in the Ninja World
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