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Comments of chapter undefined of Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Obskure
ObskureLv3Obskure

Short filler chapters seem to becoming pretty common, malfoy being his guardian means nothing when he can mind control or kill him in seconds.

DaddyDavo
DaddyDavoLv13DaddyDavo

whole lotta nothing this chap. love the novel tho.

_Arthas_
_Arthas_Lv1_Arthas_

"I feel that the plot you're constructing lacks, to be well thought out, but it overlooks significant elements. The impact of Grindelwald's plot on the series could lead to a larger-scale war plot our something like that. Considering Harry immense power as a Mage and wizard. This makes it difficult to believe that Harry would engage in mere trivial games. Essentially, his power undermines the simplicity of the situation and could be resolved easily. Moreover, the introduction of the Grambretanha plot and the Triwizard Tournament feels disjointed and disconnected from the previous phases. It would have been more cohesive if the tournament had taken place earlier. In summary, while the plot is intriguing and well-planned, its execution seems to have disrupted the overall coherence."

Epictram
EpictramLv13Epictram

Can you just idk, disappear Lucius? The whole plotline of them trying to be Harry's guardians is stupid, he already has a guardian in a different country, of which he is a citizen.

Skepparn
SkepparnLv14Skepparn

Author please take a break instead of shoving trash fillers to us when anybody with an iq over 10 would see that every single thing here is bs

LeProphet
LeProphetLv14LeProphet

what makes me curious is how are they gonna actually find harry? he could legit vanish and they cant do squat about it since there is the fildeus charm and other ways of hiding

Venerable_Read3r
Venerable_Read3rLv5Venerable_Read3r

When is harry going to kill this annoying British wizarding world and be done with it

NightCrown
NightCrownLv14NightCrown

easy solution, kill Malfoy, maybe send grindel or the merch. thanks for the chapter!

PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

I love this story... but... the Chapters always seem so shorts... and the whole Guardian thing is pretty annoying 🙄, just hope for him to die even faster...

Thinkers
ThinkersLv1Thinkers

Why are you putting fillers..it's unnecessary stretching....keep close to plot

RoseAmber
RoseAmberLv13RoseAmber

Thanks for the update 🌟

grav1ty24
grav1ty24Lv2grav1ty24

?????????? where is the plot? is it naruto?

Neusy
NeusyLv4Neusy

Thanks for the chapter.

Zetcoy
ZetcoyLv5Zetcoy

too short and feels like filler

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Thanks for the chapter

Daoist932064
Daoist932064Lv2Daoist932064

I love

Xedornox
XedornoxLv1Xedornox

TheSage110
TheSage110Lv4TheSage110

Thanks for the chapter! Harry could just say, lol no. I've passed my exams here and I have my rights.