it was bad, had high hopes for this but its pretty much unreadable, the grammar is awful and the MC is unlikeable, it physically hurt me to read this, if the author reads this here are tips: 1. practice english, how people talk and how sentences are made 2. start to think about little details, having him beat to death with broken bones means he needs to survive with broken bones and not suddenly healed after a time skip 3. the plot is cliche and boring, it feels like every other power fantasy with cliche characters and cliche place, open your horizons and search for a what could be, what if the thug was accually a good person that acts like he does because he needs money for his sick mother? thats pretty much it, I have more problems with this but these are the 3 big ones I think you should follow. until a full rewrite I will say its not worth reading
I was very excited to read a Wise Man’s Grandchild fic, but unfortunately I found myself wholely disappointed. There are several major problems with the story with the first being how cliche the start is and how rapidly the author frees the MC from difficulty. We could’ve had several chapters establishing the world and having the MC struggle to survive his poverty and situation while he slowly becomes less naive. But no, instead we grant the MC the second problem I have with the story: an OP system. His beginner pack was all of Adam’s abilities from record of ragnarok, not to mention in a world that is pretty easy to survive in compared to a lot of other fantasy settings, enough said. Third, the author leaves constant plot holes and utilized plot armor. The MC will get nearly beat to death from talking to someone and suddenly next chapter he has no injury and is somehow getting uncommon information from chatting to villagers. Lastly, the grammar is very bad, not utterly unreadable but enough that it feels like it was written by a child. I cannot reccomend this, 3.2/10.
kenja no mago fanfics are rare . it is my first time reading a fanfic on this anime . author have a good story in mind , as I really liked it . it is also good the way MC's use of his powers than orginal MC . i really liked to read all the chapters until now . 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💙💙💙💜♥️💜💙♥️💜💙♥️♥️💙💜♥️💜♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ waiting for more updates .
it's a good story but not like what I expected.... i thought the mc would be more prideful when he decided to pick the name arthur pendragon but he acted like your typical isekai mc who's acting shy in front of a girl... MC's not even an alpha male. but still gives 5 stars cuz not many of this fic.
To be honest, I had high hopes for this ff but sadly it’s just similar to other ff that aren’t good
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Me encanta la forma en que desarrollas la trama, por favor, por favor, por favor, no lo abandones, solo deberías hacer más interacciones con los personajes, ah y por favor podrías hacer una escena de pelea de todos los personajes contra el mc solo? Pienso que sería muy interesante, si no lo haces no hay problema
The MC is unreasonable, the power he gains destroys the balance of the world, and the writing quality is quite bad.
I hope the author continue to update and don't drop. I really like this fanfic, don't worry about the negative comments
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Deym sorry author, I'ma want to give you a 6 star but, there is only five here??,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Ceritanya sudah bagus dan alur ceritanya menggambarkan perkembangan karakter MC dengan baik ... Hanya saja saya tidak suka MC yang menjilat tokoh utama cerita aslinya .. Kesannya kurang bagus, walaupun MC juga kuat tetapi rasanya seperti sedikit memalukan .... Yah saya harap author membuat cerita yang lebih menarik lagi... Dan saya sarankan novel ini jangan sampai menjadi novel tragedi seperti kematian violet atau apapun.. Atau saya akan turunkan ratingnya 😂
Interesting, good... 14000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
is this a harem........................?
can you write how the mc look.by the way its a very good story and i really really hope that you never gonna drop.😀
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It’s a fun read kind of that all I can give it the world is kenja no mago(Wise Man's Grandchild) so I don’t have any high hopes but it’s still at 5 ch so who knows 🤧
its been going great, keep it up, maybe a back ground story for the mc's body could spice it up >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
