I was very excited to read a Wise Man’s Grandchild fic, but unfortunately I found myself wholely disappointed. There are several major problems with the story with the first being how cliche the start is and how rapidly the author frees the MC from difficulty. We could’ve had several chapters establishing the world and having the MC struggle to survive his poverty and situation while he slowly becomes less naive. But no, instead we grant the MC the second problem I have with the story: an OP system. His beginner pack was all of Adam’s abilities from record of ragnarok, not to mention in a world that is pretty easy to survive in compared to a lot of other fantasy settings, enough said. Third, the author leaves constant plot holes and utilized plot armor. The MC will get nearly beat to death from talking to someone and suddenly next chapter he has no injury and is somehow getting uncommon information from chatting to villagers. Lastly, the grammar is very bad, not utterly unreadable but enough that it feels like it was written by a child. I cannot reccomend this, 3.2/10.

kenja no mago fanfics are rare . it is my first time reading a fanfic on this anime . author have a good story in mind , as I really liked it . it is also good the way MC's use of his powers than orginal MC . i really liked to read all the chapters until now . 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💙💙💙💜♥️💜💙♥️💜💙♥️♥️💙💜♥️💜♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ waiting for more updates .

it's a good story but not like what I expected.... i thought the mc would be more prideful when he decided to pick the name arthur pendragon but he acted like your typical isekai mc who's acting shy in front of a girl... MC's not even an alpha male. but still gives 5 stars cuz not many of this fic.

To be honest, I had high hopes for this ff but sadly it’s just similar to other ff that aren’t good

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Me encanta la forma en que desarrollas la trama, por favor, por favor, por favor, no lo abandones, solo deberías hacer más interacciones con los personajes, ah y por favor podrías hacer una escena de pelea de todos los personajes contra el mc solo? Pienso que sería muy interesante, si no lo haces no hay problema

The MC is unreasonable, the power he gains destroys the balance of the world, and the writing quality is quite bad.

I hope the author continue to update and don't drop. I really like this fanfic, don't worry about the negative comments

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