Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

why not make a sealed area Who can only be entered by having no bad intentions, and create a sect like the cultivation worlds ? he can give a seal on his disciples that destroy the cultivation and the memory of what they learned in the sect if they betray. the sect will only use it’s power for defense only , and will live from selling the products created by the sect jutsu ,learned and created by shun on it’s trips and teached to his sect (blacksmith, sealing , cooking , alchemy , architect , etc...). while modify the ninshu: to be able to understand yourself(soul) , understand the others(body and mind =chakra), and understand the world (nature energy and elements concepts), and change the name to allow "the way to cultivate". :)

You should spread the teachings of seals, especially distribute the fast seal, so that farmers can use that to quicken their food production.

Ну вместо Мудреца меча можно было бы выбрать более крутое звание , например : Мудрец знаний ,Мудрец силы , Мудрец Инь-Ян Well, instead of the Sage of the sword, one could choose a cooler title, for example: Sage of Knowledge, Sage of Power, Sage of Yin-Yang

Clan name hmm... how about 'TENDOU' means heaven path since this ff have some cultivation how bout her title as SAGE OF HEAVENLY PATH

You're just a failed writer. You want to write a Wuxia novel, but you don't know how, and then you thought of writing a Naruto fan fiction and adding whatever oriental fantasy you can think of. Or you are stealing this novel from one of the foolish Chinese authors

I just don’t get why he’s so obsessed with teaching people that’s my only gripe so far

His making future turbulent era more chaotic and future war more deadlier, at first there would've been shinobis throwing fire and rock now there will be shinobis throwing lava, typhoon, storms, rasengans, etc, All for his amusements

At this timeframe, not all humans had chakra. So there was no “unlocking” of chakra nonsense. Hagoromo literally have chakra through ninshu. So that little girl he met most likely did not have chakra. Chakra spread over the 1000 years until everyone had it. It was through all people intermingling (after 1000 years, everyone has a common ancestor or close enough to it).

Bruh who said he needs to take one path to fame?

A legendary teacher, sage and swordsman

eu acho que você deveria parar e planejar sua história corretamente, escrever com ideias que você tem no momento não é legal e isso nunca vai longe pois você logo se esgota e acaba as ideias, assim largando a história. apenas minha opinião eu acho

The new power system boruto series there this kid who can defeat everyone in naruto series if a small killer instinct On the boy it will UNO reverse card kinda abilites

I wonder if the chapters will reach the "canon"

Riku is a good surname

Why don't you name his clan kazuki?hahaha just my suggestion because it sounds like uzumaki

Makes op mc names riku.... Seriously

sage of seals and swords

Название клана несколько туповато ,например как если бы вместо клана Учиха их клан называлсябы Шарин Или Бьяку вместо хьюга ,так что придумайте имя у которого есть смысл как Сенджу : тысяча рук , тысяча навыков или хз The name of the clan is somewhat blunt, for example, as if instead of the Uchiha clan, their clan would be called Sharin Or Byaku instead of hyuga, so come up with a name that makes sense like Senju: a thousand hands, a thousand skills or xs

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