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Comments of chapter undefined of Spirit Martial Artist (DD)

Smithsonian86_
Smithsonian86_Lv5Smithsonian86_

Thanks for the fic, hope you update the dxd one.

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RockyMasters
RockyMastersLv13RockyMasters

well it's not the best fic I ever read but a good one. the epilogue need to be cleaned and you should add what rundown what happened to the maids and all the stuff he's done at the epilogue so that we can see the world have some color that have been painted by the MC here but hey it just my opinion you can totally ignored it and and move on or learn from it with a grain of salt overall it's good fic 8/10 I will put it in the review too

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cyan_wolf
cyan_wolfLv4cyan_wolf

author san thank you for not dropping this FF and make a good epilogue

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Arsene_Holmes
Arsene_HolmesLv1Arsene_Holmes

Well, I must say I'm amazed that there was actually a proper epilogue, and that finally a Fanfic of yours got a true ending. It was a good story. I'm looking forward to the next story!.............Thanks for the chapter!

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Asura160
Asura160Lv4Asura160

Good story and we need to know about what happened after he ascended and how better the world became in the time of DD2 compared to how trash san did after becoming a god

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv13Aye_itz_cloudz

Great fic nice ending and I loved the DXD maybe you could start it again ?

Daoist497591
Daoist497591Lv13Daoist497591

Bro what is wrong with the discord server , like all the channels are missing????

_Monarch
_MonarchLv13_Monarch

thanks for the chapter

Jose_Liriano
Jose_LirianoLv13Jose_Liriano

Cuando vas a ser la secuela

an_m9awd_b3da
an_m9awd_b3daLv1an_m9awd_b3da

Nice

shiro_WD_emiya
shiro_WD_emiyaLv4shiro_WD_emiya

thanks for the story and thanks for chapter and journey

Ibrahim_NiR
Ibrahim_NiRLv11Ibrahim_NiR

No es lo mejor, pero si es muy bueno, haaa es el primer fanfic de DD que si termina y no es abandonada que leo, o es el segundo mmm... No recuerdo, pero fue muy bueno, aunque el protagonista estaba muy roto para ese pequeño mundo marcial jajaja.... Espero otra historia tuya.

Janune_Kilua
Janune_KiluaLv4Janune_Kilua

Well all i can sy i thank you very mich it was a quiet journey its really rare to see authors to be with the novel or fan fics in this webnovel from prologue to the epilogue and i hve to applaud you for that. Next I wwanna ask the author would you stilll write the God Realm Part or you will drop it here or you will write another novel as i'm with ya in the discord and i haven't been there for a while.

Dusk_Nightfall
Dusk_NightfallLv4Dusk_Nightfall

hey author Kun can you make another doulou dalu 2 in another Timeline where he will either start from scratch or a different Martial spirit

MiLo
MiLoLv4MiLo

great fanfic to read, had a fun time reading it

LifelessMan
LifelessManLv5LifelessMan

Good Work

Theus_7218
Theus_7218Lv1Theus_7218

Adorei a fic, essa teve um final e não pra ou na metade kkkk. Espero que as outras voltem.

Qwertykeyboar
QwertykeyboarLv1Qwertykeyboar

Can you write a new against the gods fanfic

Jake255
Jake255Lv4Jake255

Thank you

daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

My only concern is if his harem will ascend with him too and join him in his omniverse travel??? I really dont want him to leave them while he travels even if he can pause time.

Sheeple
SheepleLv4Sheeple

Thank you! It was an enjoyable journey!