To THE TRANSLATOR-
1. Writing Quality - It is average but can be best if it can used it proper grammer like we don't know somtimes how MC or Male/Female characters becomes SHE/HE(GENDERBENDER?🤮) and if there is a scene in future where MC or any character shouts his/her attacks please change it(Chunni?🤮)-
*For you are Translator right- kindly make it better in quality as well as story than the original Novel.
2.Story development - Quite good going in a medium pace is best.
3. Character Design - I mean everything is going on well Especially on MC's Martial Arts, Shinobi Arts, Shinigami+Hollow side but Why has not HE(MC) learned Magic and Chi yet or is it not there in the original story?
It would have been a feast to read that if the MC creating a new techniques like absorbtion+Copy skill(Absorbing criminals or harming people and copying only the people around like gaining all their abilities and memories) also creating technique like-
with all he has learned+adding Magic,Cosmic energy,Chi and all other energies combine like a cultivation technique.
*MC making earth resource infinite and saving nature(Eliminating pollution) , making the planet Larger+connecting all land masses together with infinity stones for future development taking preparation in advance for population control etc.,
4. Updates Stability - Very Stable 5/5. Atleast you get one day rest.
5. World Background - Good but would have it better with good writing quality and little modification if the translator can! I know Translator can do it.
For THE TRANSLATOR CAN make it better than the original Novel.
Thanks-
Reader.
