Comments of chapter undefined of Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Emmanuel_Peter203

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Fallen_AsuraLv3Fallen_Asura

😒😒too many panel-repetative things to complete word count ☹️.... author ..i really like this novel as i am changing my ids to read the chapters...3~4 chapters per id...but by showing these repetative things....just word count is increasing ☹️☹️

1yr

Emmanuel_Peter203AuthorEmmanuel_Peter203

Sigh I was trying to be more detailed I've been getting this comments for a while now that I started to compress my chapters later Am sorry but in the later chapters you'll see what I mean Hopefully you continue this journey with me. Is there anything you'd like me to also address?

1yr

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Robert_C_7044Lv15Robert_C_7044

Another wasted chapter GG author

6mth

Kai_Writer151Lv15Kai_Writer151

Author, first 1/3 of this chapter seems repetitive and lengthy in a monolog. Him recounting the whole incident just to explain how she is brave could be surmised into a few sentences such as "The requirements for that class is to he brave. She definitely is recounting to her actions to finish off the Serpent." His constant monologuing really is boring as it draws away from the story progression. Especially if he is constantly referring to how he doesn't have emotions and doesn't know anything.

1yr