Overall I can only review it as a 'Fic with potential' but I would read from top to bottom only if the author had the decency to atleast edit and proofread before uploading. And the spam with with 5 stars are clearly made some idiots that can't differentiate between a stranger from their own parents. I hear they were such a gullible bunch that they lick and popped a homeless man's D cause he told them it was a lollipop. Idiots!
I have seen this manhwa being a Korean myself, and I must say you did a splendid job for starters. You weaved the character in well enough, including the interaction between your character and the others. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Boa Fanfic, tem alguns erros na escrita. Mas, pode ser interessante ver um MC muito forte, Com o sangue Hamna, enchendo os figurantes de porrada, e mostrando quem é que manda.
Its barely legible trash written by a child. Don't bother. 1/5 Stars.
honestly im a bit disapointed i expected an overpowered murim guy as an hanma fighting insted we got qi stealing abilty that so op that hanma part becom usles
I'm really interested and think that this fanfic has a lot of potential. I like the fact that the first world he is going to is chronicles of the heavenly demon. I've read maybe 100 chapters of that manhwa and it's really great. I hope that he continues to travel to other martial arts worlds that are also interesting. My only concern is how op he is going to be after leaving that world, is there l like a power reset or something when he enters a new world? Cuz if not he is going to be too Op.
A good concept with good execution. The only reason I am not giving it a full 5 stars is because the story itself feels a little rushed, however I am sure it is not as much the author's fault and it's just the fact that it's well... Yujiro Hanma. Man's a beast. Besides that keep up the good work.👍🏻
Good job 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Continue onward.
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For now I find great enjoyment in reading this and feel that the author understands what he is doing. I don't see any obvious issues in the story or character so thumbs up from me
More chapters please . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Great idea despite the seemingly mediocre writing. Either way, I just wanna ask my fellow WN Readers why most Author's prefer Japanese stuff when there are some Korean Manhwas and Novels that are on par or even better than some Animes or Mangas...
The author mediocrely knows not only the world of Baki but also the character of Hanma Yujiro. And if you don’t pay attention to this, then the story about this manhwa for 4 balls.
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