Overall I can only review it as a 'Fic with potential' but I would read from top to bottom only if the author had the decency to atleast edit and proofread before uploading. And the spam with with 5 stars are clearly made some idiots that can't differentiate between a stranger from their own parents. I hear they were such a gullible bunch that they lick and popped a homeless man's D cause he told them it was a lollipop. Idiots!

I have seen this manhwa being a Korean myself, and I must say you did a splendid job for starters. You weaved the character in well enough, including the interaction between your character and the others. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Boa Fanfic, tem alguns erros na escrita. Mas, pode ser interessante ver um MC muito forte, Com o sangue Hamna, enchendo os figurantes de porrada, e mostrando quem é que manda.

Its barely legible trash written by a child. Don't bother. 1/5 Stars.

honestly im a bit disapointed i expected an overpowered murim guy as an hanma fighting insted we got qi stealing abilty that so op that hanma part becom usles

A good concept with good execution. The only reason I am not giving it a full 5 stars is because the story itself feels a little rushed, however I am sure it is not as much the author's fault and it's just the fact that it's well... Yujiro Hanma. Man's a beast. Besides that keep up the good work.👍🏻

Good job 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Continue onward.

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