Comments of chapter undefined of DxD: The forgotten mob character, Motohama

Time travel is always confusing 😵😵😵

Reader.EXE isss n-not wor-rking

Thanks for the chapter! Time travel makes my brain overheat.. Really want to see reactions of other people now that he has made his first big move.

I prefer the name Doctor who

was bored and wanted a visual rep to get my head around the time travel

Every single time travel aspect made me remember about a certain mad scientist... I wish the author good luck since I know it might be hard and confusing to create a paradoxical plot. Thanks for the chapter!

It's not as bad as I thought last chapter (since you had the mc lie about something that would've ruined the story), but I'm still uneasy. Time travel can ruin stories very easily and is usually done best when it's either done very sparingly or all the time (and is the premise of the story, e.g. Doctor Who, Re: Zero), and even then it usually isn't very good. I'm also not really a fan of his every move being manipulated and dictated by someone else, even if that someone else is his future self. It makes the story lose tension and every decision he makes seem worthless. It's fine if it's revealed he was being manipulated all this time as a plot twist (like what you revealed here), but I'm not okay with that continuing forwards with our knowledge of it.

Wow wow time travel, Yandere sister, Op Mc? Where i see this?

I an confiuse but my principal problem is the mc dont have a longinus

My brain skipped overheating in this chapter and just blew up but oh well TFTC

UPDATE???????????

As confusing the story is becoming,i can't stop reading.😘😘😘😘

I give props for using a new concept but please do set some rules for the time travel and then please don't break those if u want to keep people interested stones away then sdude

I don't know this spear is supposed to be as strong as a longinus is a good one. It would be interesting if she could get stronger with time. Drandal type becoming Ex-Durandal. After all, longinus are extremely powerful for a reason, so allowing room for the weapon to grow in power would make a lot of sense. About Grall I see many authors rescuing Valerie in the beginning. As the story is not following the original version, it may be that future plot holes can be avoided. Overall the story is very good. The giant reminded me of Susanoo.

Where is the next chapter author bro this is not funny don‘t let us down author Bro

My Brain.exe can't follow the time travel thing but I know that Gospel is from Re:Zero

This time travel but felt so much like the time travelers wife.

Is you, Roswaal?

Exp

Thanks for the chapter.