Sean_senpai
Unique take on a Naruto fan fic I love it Author sama but please explain why Naruto wasn’t as idolized as Itachi as he did everything Itachi did at the same time minus Anbu Commander. Or if thats just Naruto’s impression where he is too humble to see he too is idolized at least pre killing Itachi show that. Otherwise its not giving the story any redeeming qualities. Just my opinion but love the story thank you
... Something seriously wrong with the pacing of this story. Spends an entire chapter in a meaningless meal where nothing happens and then spends 3 paragraphs detailing what should have been the main focus of the chapter but is passed as an after thought. I would atleast consider the chapter to make it make sense chronologically and logically.