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for the titles of the chapters you can take parts of the chapter itself and turn it into comedy, like "Rahegar: and hey here the 'Tamer' of the Great Dragon Daemon" could you include different points of view? like a chapter from the perspective of the MC's princess/sister or more skinship moments (I was fascinated with the MC's interaction with his aunt/mother/sister) I also wish there were more fights, besides giving the MC a trap something small like discovering the weak point of something or the ability to learn a skill and not lose strength as well as not forgetting that skill no matter how much time passes (if you don't practice something regularly you usually forget it or it takes time to get back to something you you no longer practice how to ride a bike, write or draw).