Mohitkumar
lol
I wish my dad had left me a couple of waifus when he left for cigarettes
Bro it’s not finance it’s fiancée
I hope my father give me 4-5 wife on my 20th birthday. No I am not jealous I swear on my cat's name. My cat-
His father abandoned him but I left him 5 great wives who keep him a little snoring for being forcibly committed to him, it's a win-win.
as long as the characters are decently written and the dialogue doesn't read like it was written by a 5th grader, this could be an interesting story. That said, grammar and sentence structure need alot of work.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
hello
Did no one proofread this story before it came out cause it’s horrible
its same story as dragon monarch system
Why was he in a coma?!? Wdf
This needs an editor. With better sentence structure and grammar it would be quite good.
i dont get what's happening...
the first chapter is true chaos
How does bro get 5 beautiful wives
Time to binge read this entire book
Men I wish I was the. Mc
Hmm I all ready to go in