TheSuccessor
Interesting first start, Peter has it pretty rough, but at least he has someone close to him that understands, hopefully nothing else tragic happens later on.
Incredible chapter! I like your writing style and it's really nicely written.
Interesting Start!
Great job on the chapter.
It's sweetđ„° I love the flow!
Good first chap. It's rare to see such a high-quality first chapter here.
What a good start đ
Great start.. :-)
This is such a sad start. Interested to see where this goes.
great start
Neat