Love the start of the story I see there is potential for the progress of this story.......................................,,,........,,,................................................................,
I’ve read a lot of novels, but few manage to paint such clear pictures in my mind. Your storytelling is rich and immersive, and the way you capture emotion and setting makes it feel like a living world. I kept thinking how amazing it would look as a graphic novel or webtoon, the tone, pacing, and character moments all fit that format so naturally. This story really has the kind of depth and energy that could shine visually too.
I don’t understand, when will the mc do something different ? Because since the start of this fanfic, Olaf do the exact same action and choice of Ragnar in Vikings.