Comments of chapter undefined of I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)

I think this story had a great potential but a harem of 10 girls its absurd, good luck tough.

Wanda

I think it would be pretty unrealistic and not fun to add his Aunt May and Natasha. His Aunt basically raised him and Natasha is someone who've gone through harsh life. I'd applaud you if you can even see someone whi raised you as a potential lover. About Natasha, I believe i would be hard, extremely so but there's a slim chance. We'll notice instantly if his eomance with Natasha is forced. The others, possible.

oh lord since you including x-men be careful with professor x and the ancient one cause both can break a story far easier than they make it. thx for the chapter although very unrealistic and improbable but HELA???

I'm getting Superior Spiderman x Spider-Noir vibes.

What about all the mutant girls like Jean, emma, storm etc etc?

Thanks for the chapter and what about MJ ? Won't you add her in the hárèm ?

Deadpool is seriously the best character i havent laughed like i did when i read "besto friendo" in a while

I like the definition next to May Parker....

Should definitely give May some powers so she isn’t totally defenseless, thanks for the chapter.

Captain marvel

harem that big i already know that aint gonna work

Thanks for the chap, the harem members are great. Keep the good work

Well harem picks look awesome.

many people. I hope you know how to plan this so it's not something too shallow and artificial. because the story is good, it would be a shame if the harem ended it.

10 girls? Geezzzz that’s a risk and you're taking it? Wow I would applaud you if you're able to work this out PROPERLY. But you’re taking girls with low risk of accepting polygamy.

Quality over quantity. Out of all those girls on the list only choose 5. If you can reduce it to 3 then be my guess. if it can go to 1, then that is true quality. As a overall women, with experience, chemistry, intelligence, ability, standards, power and my bias the top 5 to me would be: Gwen Stacy(Soulmate like Chemistry sparked love), Aunt May(love sparked from sexually and romanticly changed perspecrive), Felcia Hardy(domianted sexually along with open self spark love), Jennifer Walters(dominated physically and self understanding love spark) and Susan Storm(dominated intellectually and appreciation and attention love spark). Can always end up not working out with some of them though as that is possibly or some might disagree and leave. However 5 is already a big limit also does not have to be them, there are many marvel characters, some even more open to polygamy than others.

I think you should reduce the hàrëm a little bit and include only those close to him in the hàrëm at the beginning and increase it gradually as the time goes on and he gets stronger, idk how many chapters it gonna be but if it's gonna be big you should make first 100 to 150 chapters with very few hàrém members (ideally 3 to 4) cause by then we can understand the characters too cause let's be honest it'll get boring after a while reading about the same girls unless you intend to make it a drama, you can add new hàrém members by then so it'll be acceptable to many readers too.

Thanks for the chapter! I didn't see the Harem! Didn't SEEE!!!! 'Cause I like the suspense.

lora she is a goth baddie