One word of critique is the multiple points of view. The books focus tends to stray from the MC for too long and too far away. Try experimenting with focusing on the mc's perspective followed by mixing in some third pov that's still centered around the MC. As for other points of view, it's not necessary as it just sounds like a rewrite. It's better to just write everything in 3rd Pov when you want to include others' internal thoughts and such. Aside from that, it would be much more immersive and flowing in the MC's perspective.

Then just go home. No one is forcing him to fight...

facts

BS... He chooses this and then goes on to say he's helpless. Ch 79 a little past mid way his exact words:

king of kings.... Collector

Your partner in an alternate reality is a guy or girl, maybe both or none. The point is they are not your partner, and its an alternate reality. When you think of it like that, you realize this Bell Cranel is a girl and has no association with another Bell except for being an alternate. Just like mc, an alternate could be a girl and talks to Bell (male version).

I remember when he kept saying this line over and over again, "...big enough to store all the treasure in the world...😂😂"

his name: "womanizer" ??? Saying I don't care to a name everyone will be referring to you with doesn't make much sense. Anyways, let's see cause I care.

That's not toxic. He is uncomfortable because he doesn't like the way Tione and Tiona are influencing their relationship. So he wants Ais to keep some distance. If Ais disagreed and he tried manipulating her or forcing, then it is indeed toxic. Ais saw no problem with his needs, respected his desire, and agreed. That's a couple communicating. Although you never asked for it, we as humans are affected by others, and you have made me deeply concerned for your romantic relationships. I hope you never enter a toxic relationship and continue to be ignorant about it from a personal experience perspective and knowledgeable about it from doing your own research.

dont let them influence her = keep some distance. They go hand in hand... Your comment makes no sense

someone convinced your partner to sleep with another person who is interested in your partner. Not wanting to be too overwhelming, he took a step back, and Ais went to comfort lefyia. Now he tells Ais he doesn't like the instigators that caused this situation. Yet he is Chinese mc for that. We as humans sometimes don't like people just based on a vibe, much less a direct influencer in your relationship. Especially the night after your consumation.

In the end, your chinese... If I called you that because of how I found your comment to not match my opinion, then isn't that ridiculous. I could no longer like you because of this comment. For some, they hate you, others they may want to kill you and other agree or like you. The mc's reaction is relatively normal on the general scale of human behavior. That's a fact for all humans, Chinese or not.

someone convinced your partner to sleep with another person who is interested in your partner. Not wanting to be too overwhelming, he took a step back, and Ais went to comfort lefyia. Now he tells Ais he doesn't like the instigators that caused this situation. Yet he is Chinese mc for that. We as humans sometimes don't like people just based on a vibe, much less a direct influencer in your relationship. Especially the night after your consumation.

should have made him consume the water of life and become like Ban... Then, when he utilizes the broken world over time, his immortal physique will nourish and heal the broken world. instead: two items appear that perfectly match each other, even capable of automatically merging....

it's not funny. I speak for myself.

Nonsense.

Another Superman that doesn't take into consideration the innocebts killed on his exchange? or did the mc realize? or did the mc forget he could have hanmered Hulk up then smacked him towards the sea where there are no civilians?

iron man technically happened, its just the Mc captured him first a day or so ahead of time. Thus HULK would be next plus its a fanfic

eay easier to just save, announce and get the points...

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