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Comments of chapter undefined of The Extra's Survival

Twilight_jackas
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errors are much better here. Btw what docs who you write on

Twilight_jackas
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where do you write this before posting

Mohitkumar:Docs? ??

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LesserCodex
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So reading this is great however there are some spelling and grammar issues I don't like pointing them out (as a writer myself) and you haven't mentioned your thoughts on it so I suggest you download grammarly you can use it for free and it really helps. Other than that great chapter.

vkg313
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You are still spending too much time explaining the events between fred and charles...

ishtarin
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If the protagonist continues to interact with the main character, he will stop being an extra and become a secondary character or something like that, right? xd

Tempty
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nicee

Aztec_Azazel
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Amitabh 🙏 donor author stop forcing things Amitabh

Dieu_Van
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BASTILLE
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Thx