UnknownGod94
Nice chapter. May I suggest that in the future, if you’re Going to be doing multiple POV changes in one chapter, especially short changes back and forth, that you just write everything in third person POV instead of switching back and forth between different people’s First person POV. It would definitely Make your chapter smoother to read and transition.
You could do that. But I wouldn’t Hard commit to such a strict limit. There are lots of fun to be had with POV changes so long as you put in the effort to dI them properly.
UnknownGod94:thanks for the input. thinking on next novel it will be only main person pov with hearing people talk but not thinking