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TrueStrike

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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike5mth
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    Nope, this is the wrong way to go. You played right into Fury’s hands. Shame. With your meta knowledge you could’ve entered into it at a much better position of strength. Allowed Fury to lead you around like a lost puppy.

    It was just the right way to go if he wanted to be a part of the first Avengers events.
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    Marvel: A New Avenger
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike5mth
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    Why not? The Convergence just makes space rifts that connect random places in the 9 realms. One of them happens to connect to the place where the reality stone is hidden. It’s not like it’s in a whole different dimension. The space stone can just make the same portal once you know where the hidden location is. If he didn’t have the space stone then yea, he would have to wait for the convergence.

    The Reality Stone was nowhere to be found.
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike5mth
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    You have the entire record of the past. Search up when Asgard defeated the dark elves to see where they hid the aether/reality stone then get it with the space stone. Repeat this process with the power stone. Power power level yourself until you can equip 3 stones. Space, Power, and Reality Go beat up Thanos. Write your next fanfic.

    The Reality Stone was nowhere to be found.
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Replied to Ace767

    You can explain it easily. He’s very passionate in his Cosplay Hobby. If Bruce Wayne can get stuff for his Spurlunking you can get stuff for your Cosplay.

    Yeah I really need SHIELD to make contact with me soon or how will I get good weapons.
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    [Marvel:Naruto Template System]
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
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    Meh it’s not a matter of you being powerful enough. Minato is plenty powerful even when he died young and couldn’t truly reached his full potential. You just don’t know how to fight for crap and can’t even use effectively 100% of what you already have. Getting more templates is a waste. Fuinjutsu is fucking broken. MCU Thanos is honestly not that super powerful without all the stones. Half of the team literally almost got the gauntlet off of him on Titan before starlord fucked it up. If Fuinjutsu can seal up demons and tailbeasts you can seal up one mad Titan But if you’re dead set on giving him more templates author, please don’t do Uchiha Madara. This is your chance to be unique and creative. Pick something else.

    I really hope to get more templates soon. Even though I am by no means weak, seeing how I held my own against a Hulk level threat, I need to be more powerful against someone like Thanos.
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
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    Clearly you need more practice with using flying thunder god in combat. Once you’ve placed that seal on someone it’s gg. You should never need to counter anything straight on like this.

    The impact creates a shockwave, that let's cars fly away and both of our arms are flung back. However, it's clear, that I took more damage, if my broken arm is anything to go by.
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    Bella? Bella!?

    "What's her name mom?" I ask while still looking at my sister. "Isabelle Carter or just Izzy for short." She says while looking at her.
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    The first sentence in this paragraph reads like the droid is inside his nanosuit and not how you intend for it to be. You’ve already established that he’s wearing the suit. So it’s not needed to repeat again.

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    Star Wars: Skywalker
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    Kai Carter. A bit of an odd combination. But it could’ve been worse. Could’ve been Bob Uchiha.

    "What are you going to name him miss Carter?" asks the nurse while looking at me. "Kai. Kai Carter." says my mother.
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    [Marvel:Naruto Template System]
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    Would there have been a different secret system if he had decided to be a villain?

    [Ding! Secret requierment to unlock "Naruto Template System" is deciding to become a hero!]
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    Wow. What happen? First 2 paragraphs started so well with nice and proper looking sentences. Punctuations we’re in the right places. Things that needed to be capitallized were capitalized. It’s Like you forgot your basic English for the rest of the chapter. Or stopped trying.

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    Enjoying life in twilight
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Replied to LegendaryChaos

    Nope pretty sure he just has a shitty friend that likes to drug his drinks.

    ''Forest? Did John again put the fucking drugs on my drink? Last time I ended up at Washington, now where the fuck am I?'' Jack felt another headache coming.
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    Ghost Rider in Twilight
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Replied to big_cheese_1564

    Earth having higher gravity would make everything on it denser and shorter. Humans, vamps, werewolves. There would be no exception. But since only the vamps are “dense” it’s not the gravity but simply a built in feature of their race. What’s The actual physical Cause? Who knows. Also who cares?

    After sorting memories I went downstairs to have my breakfast and then returned to my room. The first thing I did was check my psychic abilities . I used a pen and concentrated on it willing it to float. it took me few hours to make a slight movement. It was pretty hard and needed to be trained. The next thing I did was start a light workout which I plan on keep increasing with the coming years and learning all sorts of martial arts and make some money privately which will come on a later date. And thus started my days of training my powers and waiting for the start of canon.
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    You mean his slashing hand is all right.

    He lost an arm but it didn't affect his strength much since his main slashing hand was right.
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    Naruto: The Template System
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Replied to TONYSCRIB

    You could do that. But I wouldn’t Hard commit to such a strict limit. There are lots of fun to be had with POV changes so long as you put in the effort to dI them properly.

    Ch 7 Chapter 6
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    Nice chapter. May I suggest that in the future, if you’re Going to be doing multiple POV changes in one chapter, especially short changes back and forth, that you just write everything in third person POV instead of switching back and forth between different people’s First person POV. It would definitely Make your chapter smoother to read and transition.

    Ch 7 Chapter 6
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike6mth
    Commented

    He’s just going make an entire magical discipline Just like that? On the spot in only 6 hours? Are you sure his power isn’t Arc of Embodiment instead? We all know that Occlumency is the magical art of protecting your mind from mental attack. But how does he even knows how to do it in practice. And doesn’t The practice of Occlumency Also requires you to get attacks repeatedly In order to build up the defense?

    Tattoo guy: "Weird tattoo but I like it."
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike7mth
    Commented

    Or maybe they were speaking Japanese And you were not Japanese in your last life.

    oh before I forget, I can now properly understand people, before I could only partially understand them, I think it was because of reincarnation and my body couldn't handle the load.
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    Unlimited Blade Works in DxD
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike7mth
    Commented

    Wow. Done so much and not even 10yrs old yet. What is even left to do?

    After the tour Alfred just made me promise to give him a Tron-cycle as well. Who wouldn't, it looks awesome. He asked some time to think whether he wants to take the gene enhancer serum or not. I was able to find one of the Kree cities on earth and get information on how they created the Inhumans. Because of the new data I ended up unlocking, I was able to make a stealth advanced satellite and got it into orbit. Thanks to it I was able to locate Atlantis as well as Attilan on moon.
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    My Marvel Random Power System
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  • TrueStrike
    TrueStrike7mth
    Commented

    He could just use Arc of Embodiment to create dummies with master level hand to hand combat skills to spar and practice Against. He literally has infinite mana to pump in to make whatever he can imagine.

    In the fourth year, he concentrated on hand-to-hand combat and ranged weaponry, but hand-to-hand took a lot longer to do since he didn't have anyone to test out the techniques that he was learning, unlike with weapons training where he can use a dummy.
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