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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: One Step At A Time

Ranbov_D_Myes
Ranbov_D_MyesLv4Ranbov_D_Myes

Thanks for the chapter. 😁

Hishebatman
HishebatmanLv2Hishebatman

So basically Fang Yuan in Naruto. I hope he's atleast half as smart as him though

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

I mean, the MC also acts kind of stupid. Why is he taking the way of gaining mangekyou from the show as gospel. Also I really don't see it working if he doesn't truly care for his family or sister.

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

if chakra is the mix of spiritual and physical then it makes sense his chakra reserves will be low until he gets his first growthspurt. And then again during his teenage years it should also grow the most since then is when msucles grow the best.

Thieving
ThievingLv13Thieving

A beautiful chapter. Although there’s some issues I pointed out, it’s still good. No one’s perfect.

GraveMarker
GraveMarkerLv10GraveMarker

Pretty good chapter. You have some to -> too* mistakes so you should probably check that. Anyways keep up the good work.

Cdn_Memu
Cdn_MemuLv3Cdn_Memu

hahahaha I couldn't notice the personality changes

Cdn_Memu
Cdn_MemuLv3Cdn_Memu

another good chapter

Sau11
Sau11Lv14Sau11

thx for chapter

HuskyWarrior
HuskyWarriorLv5HuskyWarrior

Weird Mc but we'll see how it goes

Lingatwera
LingatweraLv1Lingatwera

Good chapter.

YourShadowsenpai
YourShadowsenpaiLv13YourShadowsenpai

Thanks for the chapter this Fanfic really surprised me cause i thought it was like the others.

draculemorningstar
draculemorningstarLv4draculemorningstar

thanks for the chapter looking forward to more