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GraveMarker1yrCommentedAlso, pretty sure effects of Compound V are random.
Of course, this chemical substance was greatly flawed. For instance, it was addictive and unstable, requiring a long period of injections for it to work.- GraveMarker2yrCommented
Naive. So Naive. How disappointing. But I guess I will add that to part of mc traits.
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I am trying to come up with a mental image of what this looks like, but so far, it's all so....
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Very fang yuan like, well done.
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I guess I like the fact that the mc had some thought to it. Great job. But is it that simple? I wonder.
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Almost perfected huh. Hmm, it seems a little forced that you are trying to give him some flaws. Hmm, maybe for future development or maybe you do not think an mc with complete emotional control (not emotionless but complete control) is a good character. I am curious.
This paragraph has been deleted. - GraveMarker2yrReplied to Laron_Shawn"Huh" Never thought I'd see my own blood, it's a lot more memorizing than I thought, same with being shot, I figured he would just taze me or sum, guess I was wrong.
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I knew it was coming, "sword-like eyebrows". It was inevitable.
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Yup, indeed. Even the Bible said that we shouldn't spare the rod and spoil the child. It is the duty of every senior to nurture their wayward juniors. Such kindness. It really warms my heart.
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Well, I guess it depends on reader's taste. Personally, I prefer it when the switch is not announced because it breaks your immersion in the novel but other people like it because they get confused about perspective when they are not warned before the switch.
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I agree, this one is kinda bad. It is understandable but you gotta read it twice.
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Feels similar to something fang yuan would say
Being a superhero who also has influence in the political spectrum of the nation grants someone an immense amount of power which no man should have, but Tony was exactly so. He had the ability to get away with almost any crime and he used this ability of his to kidnap a homeless couple from the streets. - GraveMarker2yrReplied to Bobbydale_Murr
No problem author, keep it up!!
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The story is interesting. I don't quite understand what is going on, but that is not a turn off. In addition, the mc is acting like a real lich which is a huge plus for me. The only problem with the novel is that the grammar is faulty. It is still possible to understand but it is very uncomfortable. Anyways, I don't know if the novel is ongoing but great job.
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Ok. you made it. Very nice author. My only wish was that you described the females suffering just as well as the male. I am not 100% convinced but I am about 85% convinced, so it is good enough to continue. Thank you.
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Wow it's weak or are this people strong?
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Very nice. If I remember correctly, overlord death knights were level 35 overall.
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how does he know that he is weak?
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fair enough
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