Marianne_2020
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interesting
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While the grammar's not perfect it's far better than some. It isn't giving me a tick or consider quitting and finding something else so I wouldn't be overly concerned. I am impressed that you have addressed it and are working to improve. Kudos!
Good start. I also have raised children with very little money. Great love transcends financials.
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Don't put yourself down author-san , your grammar is great
All gud so far
amazing
nice start
Interesting start
can't wait for more
Should I prepare a tissue?
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