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OMG!!! Worst syntax I've read in a while. Maybe a great storyline but if you wish to have English speaking readers this needs proofreading and editing by someone for whom English is their first language. As written the story is horribly awkward and difficult to read. I just can't read this.
This kind of cuckoo is a learned response. While the intrigues me the amount of chapters in insane and worse there are some that are privilege locked. So based on that I will read the available free chapters and then move on. While I understand the author does this to earn revenue I can purchase a completed best seller on Kindle for a fraction of the cost of this novel here. Some may opt for reading here but avid readers will not it's to expensive.
Thank you for your response. I'm old school and have bought hard cover new releases for less than the total chapters price here. I know you don't control chapter length or cost but the amount of chapters and total cost can be off-putting. Any way to annotate when a new book in the series is starting. It would be helpful to know and add value. đ
Enjoying the storyline 31 chapters in. The catch, today as I checked it there are 934 chapters plus those in privileged reader membership. So NOT a SHORT story by any means. It's good but be prepared to spend a small fortune or if you have patience use the points or daily fast passes to read it.
Good storyline. A bit of superfluous detail that didn't improve the story. Some poor sentence structure and horrible spelling. Sadly, enough to make reading difficult and awkward reading. Still readable with persistence. Writer, recommend proofreading and editing to improve content and reader's experience for improved marketing. Definitely worth the time and effort. More readers equals more profitability equals more money in your wallet.