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Hmmnnnβ¦. This is not a great fanfiction for me. First, the mc is not cool. No matter how the author portrayed the mc as a cool person, it was simply tragic. Second, the monologue writing, the words, action. The flow of the plot is quite decent for the most part, its just when i read it, it does not give a sense of fulfillment. I read some amazing novel and fanfiction before this one, great and mature wordings, nice grammar, great plot, great twist and the last thing i want no romance. Which is why reading this gives me a downcast feeling and dissapointment. Anyway, better luck with your book. Hope you can bring something amazing for me to read. I stop reading after their introduction in the first day of highschool. I canβt take the cringeness when i read itβ¦.
Really a great fanfic, I see some comments complaining about grammar, but honestly, I don't care about grammar. As long as the story is good, I will always be interested in reading good fanfics like these (in my opinion). -Of course, as long as it's readable, I don't care about grammar, I'm reading it looking for a good story, not for grammar or language classes :v.
honestly the grammar started off pretty bad but it's better now (at least the whole thing was readable) the story has finally gotten to an important event involving classes (the island/camping test) and the Mc is subtly taking part in the class matters. My biggest problem is half the time I think this story is dropped as the author will post a chapter once every 9-12 days. I literally forget about this story half the time
Good enjoyable read, but nothing amazing. MC fits perfectly in the environment, and feels unique in the cast. Good to see how he interacts with everybody. His inner energy is quite OP but it doesn't really matter while to story is mostly dealing with relationships. MC's interactions are what makes the story. Never read COTE but could feel when things slightly deviated from original. Nice read.
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