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Comments of chapter undefined of Unwanted Saiyan (Naruto x DBZ)

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Unwanted Saiyan (Naruto x DBZ)

AkiraIP

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ridokou_naruto
ridokou_narutoLv14ridokou_naruto

why cant there be just one Saiyan why add another I like it when a character is unique and special that who they are or what they have separates them from the rest but apparently there is another Saiyan ................ yay😐

2yr
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AkiraIP
AkiraIPAuthorAkiraIP

Another Saiyan is Rival to MC or the Final boss for MC to fight.

2yr
King_Rycon
King_RyconLv1King_Rycon

This kinda sounds somewhat cringe.

1yr
Daijena
DaijenaLv14Daijena

missing some "is" here and there and some other small words to connect your words to form sentences. It's still understandable what your writing about, it's just that it ain't very smooth, cause of that disconnected feeling to it.

2yr
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