Comments of chapter undefined of Tower Defense Survival: I Defend the Whole Country Alone!
Tower Defense Survival: I Defend the Whole Country Alone!
Alexender
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The plot is about a big tour game that may cost cities destruction and lives. The narrative style is perfect and there is a big suspense. The reader wants to know more about the game. The description is rich and there are many lively scenes. It is written in a consistent language. It is an exciting adventure story.It is original too. Good job!
after thinking about it for a while I've got some concerns that I feel I need to ask about the plot. what determines nationality? to better understand the question, does TRUE patriotism determine nationality? paperwork of the country labeling an individual as a resident of the country? perhaps personal belief? I feel it's important because in the world there's a lot of people who like to make trouble for others. what's stopping these individuals from "officially" Moving to these countries, wait for the opportunity to "represent" their home country and then actively "sabotage" their team? wouldn't put it past rival nations to do just that in order to get an edge over the competition.
so read 1 chapter a 100 player goes in and if 1 player dies 1 year is off from your entire country lifespan which means that if an accident hapens and more then 20 of them die in an instant then all the old and peple who has cancer etc would die in an instan that like 1-5% of your country population thats insane plus your entry country could die if every player is dead sooo good job you potentialy made your country go extint good story so far btw
