Luminous_Arcadian
First writer you are great you don't need to worry about anything, beacuse what you are doing or writing right now is just the best and how do I express this in words. Just now I read about 2 to 3 chapter and I was able to relate to them as if it was own story. And the way you described the surrounding is just so so so beautiful and fascinating. Keep writing this world needs author like you!
First of all, the story's writing style was fantastic! There are almost no noticeable errors. Second, the story's plot to far is amazing and heart-felt. Third, I love how the author created the characters and the relationships between them. I personally like Marco! This story is definitely a good read!
Interesting, well-written, and catchy synopsis. The author has done an amazing job of keeping the reader interested from the beginning. The characters are well portrayed, especially Marco's. I loved the small details and the suspense in the story. Can't wait to read more...Highly recommended!! Keep up the good work, author!
I love how the story is unwinding. I love how realistic it is and descriptions we written that one can actually picture everything read in the novel. Especially the way the moments with nature is explained. The language is good and proper but the chapters are too long. The theme and genre is justified. We all are indeed the lost souls searching for our own meaning and purpose in life. Let's hope we find then and let this novel be a guide to many [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update] Keep doing well authors.
Overall : the synopsis of the book caught my attention and the plot line was great! The story itself was magnificent! The author knows where he/she wants to take the story to! Writing quality : the writing was good and there were not many grammatical mistakes made in there. The writing style was easy to understand and the story flow was just great! Updating : stable updates for the story! Characters : the characters were captivating and they each had their own set of personalities that makes the story even more interesting! Fate has brought the two to meet and cross paths, I can’t wait to see what awaits ahead. World background : the background descriptions were well written! The actions that happen were detailed and descriptive, which makes the story more pleasing to read!! My thoughts : the story was great and seemed realistic in terms of some parts and I feel like I could feel their emotions through the story. It definitely is a hidden gem read! Really hope to see more of the story, good job author and keep up the good work!! ☺️✨
Great author! This is a beautiful novel. From the first chapter, the words and well crafted descriptions help me immerse into the main lead's thoughts and emotions. That said, the character design is truly well done in this one, I even felt that, Marco as the Main Lead, can lead the story with only his inner thoughts. The writing quality is excellent, with great fluidity. My only hope is that there would be more chapters. Excellent work!
first, I will begin with the title of this novel, definitely, it is such that draws in a reader to read about this book. Though i don't really prefer the synopsis, i strongly believe the writer can rewrite it and surely because of his great skill at writing, he can come up with a very captivating synopsis. Into the premises of the novel, i think the book is filled with a lot of catharsis to accompany a reader into his own world of agony. hehehe... The book cover is also beautiful. Overall, the book is very much interesting. Kudos to the writer.