One Piece: Dragon King

THE FIRST REVIEW!!! LOVE THE IDEA!!! WRITING QUALITY NEED TO UP A BIT AND EXCHANGE THE SURNAME AND NAME SINCE ONE PIECE NAMING STYLE IS BASED ON JAPANESE LIKE THE SURNAME SHOULD BE FIRST(EG. MONKEY D. LUFFY NOT LUFFY D. MONKEY)!!! STORY DEVELOPMENT :- ITS STILL EARLY TO TELL BUT IT MIGHT BE GREAT IF IT IMPROVES IN FURTHER CHAPTERS!!! ALL IN ALL IT WILL BE WORTHWHILE TO READ IT AND PLIZ DON'T COMPARE IT TO OTHER BOOKS!!!

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Not a bad story at the time of this writing. Average hero, average narrative. This is better than what you find in the rubbish mountains of most fanfiction.

So far I quite like the story.It has some grammar mistakes but it's like one spelled wrong in the whole chapter, so ot doesn't ruin the experience.The timeline is original, it's set right before the Rocks pirates form. The story's pace is also good, it doesn't feel forced like some fanfiction I read. The main character is like 7 years old and gets some decent character development which I quite like along with the other main character currently in the story. The author sets up chapters and arcs for the future quite nicely as well.And the system is barely there which I like since most fanfictions make the system too op. Overall the story so far is quite good.

Good Fanfiction for now (9 chapter) I like the idea for the MC to have a type of physique like kaido but at the same time not the same More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter More Chapter

espero que no te dejes influir por comentarios tontos como la otra historia un saludo y que tengas buena salud f f f f f f f f f f f

It's pretty bad, a bit boring story for me, and the mc has a system, but not a devil fruit as of chapter 31. So the only thing relating him to Acnologia is the fricking name. Now the author said he would give mc the fruit later on after a few years, but still, na i can't recommend this one.

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Can anyone tell me how MC's goal changed from becoming strongest to replace WG. I mean MC's background has nothing to do with celestial dragons and there is a reason for hating pirates. I don't get it why he wants to remove WG and don't tell me it's because celestial dragons have few thousands slaves in their home and he wants to save them.

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