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The_TubeLv53yr
2021-07-11 22:08

THE FIRST REVIEW!!! LOVE THE IDEA!!! WRITING QUALITY NEED TO UP A BIT AND EXCHANGE THE SURNAME AND NAME SINCE ONE PIECE NAMING STYLE IS BASED ON JAPANESE LIKE THE SURNAME SHOULD BE FIRST(EG. MONKEY D. LUFFY NOT LUFFY D. MONKEY)!!! STORY DEVELOPMENT :- ITS STILL EARLY TO TELL BUT IT MIGHT BE GREAT IF IT IMPROVES IN FURTHER CHAPTERS!!! ALL IN ALL IT WILL BE WORTHWHILE TO READ IT AND PLIZ DON'T COMPARE IT TO OTHER BOOKS!!!

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noname_marco
noname_marcoAuthor

I didn't realize that but I start doing that in the next chapters

The_Tube
The_TubeLv5

thank u for the consideration!!!

noname_marco:I didn't realize that but I start doing that in the next chapters
Charreos
CharreosLv3

chill bro

The_Tube
The_TubeLv5

???

Charreos:chill bro
Charreos
CharreosLv3

the caps lock is making it seem look like you are screaming lol

The_Tube:???
The_Tube
The_TubeLv5

oh i didn't know bout that I though it would be more noticeable that's why😂

Charreos:the caps lock is making it seem look like you are screaming lol
TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

Stop screamin man

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