Comments of chapter undefined of Hero of Darkness
Hero of Darkness
CrimsonWolfAuthor
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Lot of good one, but careful about power creep problem there, because I feel just the 3 divine blessing are already quite OP, and that weapon mastery thing also would be enough, too. But all of rune blessing ?, that could go overhand real quick and make you have problem in giving the mc challenge and plot around there. For example you can't plot a exciting conspiracy about who behind this scene in the city if the mc can just 'snap' his finger and found the culprit already, you see that problem ?, either you have to think more harder for the plot around that or you end up neft/make mc more stupid for no reason or throw powerful enemy that appear out of nowhere like dragon ball wacky powerscale there (like they can't stick to their world building at all and there alway someone stronger than mc, and repeat that cliche's)
Author....it was going well until this chapter. Why would you give him all the abilities and still talk about how other MCs get more powerful abilities. The three divine abilities were already enough but since you wanted a foolproof MC that acts like an MC of any story with strong instincts and powerful weapon mastery etc.....why did you say the MC is different. The MC now will all those abilities that you didn't want to explain how he got them, you decided to gift him in the beginning. Anyone can survive with all those abilities.
