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I'm enjoying the story and thanks author but..... you seem to be going after a lot of praising the MC in your style of writing. you are slowly leaning to the way other trashy novels keep dragging the story. The story is flowing with a slow pace and dragging so please don't add more and make it unbearable to wait.
Author....it was going well until this chapter. Why would you give him all the abilities and still talk about how other MCs get more powerful abilities. The three divine abilities were already enough but since you wanted a foolproof MC that acts like an MC of any story with strong instincts and powerful weapon mastery etc.....why did you say the MC is different. The MC now will all those abilities that you didn't want to explain how he got them, you decided to gift him in the beginning. Anyone can survive with all those abilities.
thanks again
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